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Author Name: Freebluefish 4 Comments
Date Added: August 27, 2004 14:08:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Hidden Paths


In the riddle of the woods
the mist does flow like a living
obscuring veil of mysteries,
hiding all the paths with liquid presence--
every path is coaxed into silence
and does not call out to my traveling ears,
to come this way or that.
i cannot discover the way that i must go
among a labyrinth teeming
with overlapping fluid vagueness...

As i wander there in the forest.
Each mysterious bough seems to gently
turn their limbs in gentle reflection--
singing matchless in the impending oppression of nothingness.
Each leaf rustles elating their woody prayers
echoing up into the corridors of the heavens.
cascading their worship to the throne beyond all worlds
how can i not let my humble hymns
not join theirs with my unspoken words
turning as a windmill among their serene voices
as the mists swirls around me like invisible pinwheels
covering the paths i must choose that which may diverge
with me unknowing obscuring the ways
set out darkening me into insignificance. . .

i pray for your inner light
oh keeper of my prayers
and your supernal language echoes
out the conundrums of my heart
and your living words like radiant doves
lights me beyond all perplexities and troubles--
beyond this mortal blindness
and my unknowing feet follow
traveling the paths that my own eyes do not comprehend. . .
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngelface on November 24, 2009 10:34:35 AM Report
This was a beautiful write.  I agree with Aidan you have some beautiful titles.

 

Angelface

Comment By: FreeAidan Jojhenson on September 3, 2004 06:54:10 PM Report
Hurrah! :P I love this!! I'm putting this on one of my favorites! wow.. this is a wonderful poem. I mostly looked at this, because of the titles, I love the titles that you have for your poems! They are great!
Aidan J.
Comment By: FreeWith pain comes strength on August 28, 2004 08:12:25 AM Report
Wow!
This is just beautiful...what more can i say?
Beautiful.
Nik
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 27, 2004 05:12:47 PM Report
ANDREW,
THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE MOST LOVELY POEM I HAVE READ IN AWHILE...***** ~SHE




 


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