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Author Name: Freefanofjims 7 Comments
Date Added: August 17, 2004 03:08:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Loser~3

Loser

 

Many times while growing up

I was always called a loser

So it should be of no surprise

I am my personal abuser

But now I have gotten older

And searched deep down inside

Where I hear those little comments

That stole most my hope and pride

So as time began to heal

These scars that I have carried

Iím digging up these things

Within in me I have buried

Understanding pulled a lever

That released my hurt and shame

And knowledge made me prouder

Of this man behind my name

My feet are moving forward

I'll no longer look behind

But I won't forget the moments

Or the depths of uphill climbs

I lived within a shallow grave

But I climbed out of that hole

So now Iím repairing the damage

That I've done to my poor soul

Author's Notes:

And sometimes we drown in the seas of despair-
Normally I try to lift up the spirits of as many as I can-
Right now it just seems like nothing is going right and
even if I try to bring peace to myself it just aggravates me more-
At the time of writing this The most recent cycle was a consuming one
and it hit me like a wave of emotion- All the tragedies along the coast-
Friends with some deep troubles- My Mother in Law that I love dearly 
had a rough two weeks- I just needed to breathe-
Peace~
James

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Comment By: FreeJordyn on August 18, 2004 07:47:03 PM Report
That poem was awesome and so desreving but i didnt want to just say what everyone else always says( great write) and i didnt want to just add it to favorites and not comment.THe poem really touched me personally because I am treated the same way.Thanks 4 this poem cause even if you dont realize it your poems will always be a gift to someone when it touches their heart.
~*Jordyn*~
Comment By: FreeCeeCee on August 17, 2004 07:38:44 PM Report
Very well written....loved the way you portrayed the battle from living in the "shallow" grave"....keep walking! You're bound to reach a mountain top again soon!

CeeCee
Comment By: FreeJennifer on August 17, 2004 11:38:16 AM Report
this is really a good poem!!! SO many can relate, including me! This deserves 2 thumbs up!!!
Jen
Comment By: FreePili Pubul on August 17, 2004 11:22:53 AM Report
GREAT WRITING MY FRIEND,Now that you climbed out of a hole created by people that didn't have the vision and inside to do what you was able to do, feel sorry for them,they will remain there, and go on. In many ways experience had help you grow into the compassionate and wise man you are today.
Comment By: Freegrneyedbtch on August 17, 2004 10:43:25 AM Report
i know these feelings all too well...this is a wonderful write. thank you-livi
Comment By: FreeBrittany on August 17, 2004 05:14:35 AM Report
great write james i can relate
Brittany
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 17, 2004 04:44:21 AM Report
Been there my brother and so I am sending you loving thoughts to lighten your darkness.
Words are so powerful and the things said to us in childhood can have far reaching effects.
You are anything but a loser and I am walking beside you in spirit till you feel stronger.
in love and understanding support.
Alison Storm Wolf




 


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