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Author Name: Freesybilvane 14 Comments
Date Added: July 29, 2004 12:07:08 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Balance

My heart is riding on a swing
Swirling through summer's sweetened air
Your heart is attached to a millstone
Pulling towards winter's withered wasteland

My eyes gaze in wonder
At the miracles of a million marvels
Your eyes slowly turn down
On the trails of tiresome toiling

Will your bleeding
stop when mine begins
Will space expand around you
when I lock myself in

Or will we simply need to
tilt the mirror
(carefully)
to the other side

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShruti on June 3, 2006 09:16:44 AM Report
Young as I am, I do have a particular experience I thought I had dealt with. Until this came along. You make my heart remember what my mind chose to forget.You lovely lady, you.
Comment By: FreeJoanna Szymanska on March 8, 2006 06:14:07 PM Report
I remember one summer day when I had a conversation with a friend of mine. I thought that day about two magic hats. One hat, with my thoughts I wanted to put on his head, and the other, with his thoughts, to put on mine. We were trying to get closer but yet the distance grew bigger. Then I thought I was "eating his space".I find my emotions and my thoughts in your poem. Thank you.
Comment By: FreeScott on September 1, 2005 05:12:52 AM Report
it really came through in the end ... a lot of feeling here ...
Comment By: FreeDawud on September 30, 2004 04:10:51 PM Report
Good piece of literature, great imagery." At the miracles of a million marvels" and "On the trails of tiresome toiling." Great lines.
Dawud.
Comment By: FreeSteve Sniukas on September 8, 2004 05:23:55 AM Report
Very Interesting wite, especially liked the part of the mirror, as i consider all of us to be mirrors for one another....
Comment By: FreeS on August 26, 2004 02:31:16 PM Report
nice i liked it a lot!
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 19, 2004 01:29:11 PM Report
Brilliant work! Into my favourites it goes.
How tortured are we who feel the emotions SO deeply!
This poem is SO short but SO incredibly powerfull! You are a wonderful poet, my friend.
I know EXACTLY where you are coming from here as you have in the past shared with me.

Comment By: FreePearl on August 16, 2004 02:02:22 PM Report
good poem, very nice:)

~Mel~
Comment By: FreePaul Peter McLean on August 12, 2004 05:19:20 PM Report
Great poem Heike. It has an interesting theme; whether, and to what extent, one accommodates the nature of another. The poem flows well too.
Comment By: FreeS on August 5, 2004 05:44:36 PM Report
nice use of alliteration. great poem
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 4, 2004 03:25:17 PM Report
I loved the use of the contrast of the two....Intriguing, and done so the reader can understand perfectly....Very nicely done, Heike...
Thought provoking of one's balancing act......Margaret..the Bag Lady
Comment By: FreeCorina on August 2, 2004 09:17:55 AM Report
Brilliant. All your poems hide behind the words such deep meanings, such an intelligent mind. Balance...
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on July 31, 2004 01:20:52 PM Report
What a dilemma. It takes courage to risk the higher plane for the sake of raising another's consciousness. Nice work, Heike. ML
Comment By: FreeEric on July 30, 2004 01:20:29 AM Report
Oour waiting is finaaly rewarded by another brilliant poem from you, an excellent story of waiting for a heart to heall, and wondering how long-a thing I think many of us have felt.




 


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