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Author Name: Freesybilvane 8 Comments
Date Added: June 10, 2004 12:06:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Haiku

She's parchment, you're stone

Feeling strong, but donít forget

That paper wraps rock

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Comments:
Comment By: Freeaaron payne on April 10, 2006 05:26:38 PM Report
ha! good haiku. ap
Comment By: FreeIngwa on March 27, 2005 01:31:02 PM Report
Beautiful, addictive. Keep penning.
Comment By: FreeAJ on July 27, 2004 05:56:57 PM Report
great poem, keep writing!
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on July 23, 2004 01:48:32 PM Report
It amazes me that so few words can convey so much meaning. Excellent, Heike. ML
Comment By: FreeEric on June 24, 2004 10:52:52 AM Report
Excellent use of the haiku form, and I also like the use of what is essentially a child's game as a metaphor.
Comment By: FreeMary AnnieA.V. on June 11, 2004 05:27:14 AM Report
love to haiku..this ones very good..anna maria
Comment By: Freemelanie del valle on June 10, 2004 09:44:41 PM Report
picturesque words tell a vivid story in so few rods! excellent!
Comment By: FreeCorina on June 10, 2004 01:52:44 PM Report
an original metaphor. Again, very thought provoking, somehow I feel like I can relate. I love this, such a concentrated essence in a few words.




 


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