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Author Name: Freemaybememories 12 Comments
Date Added: June 08, 2004 22:06:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A drink, a wink, and a look
She calls in. She's bawling. I tell her to quit stalling
She tells me the appalling. Memories she can't quite recall in
Snowflake fallen. I lay awake for her calling
Nights by the lake I would never let her fall in
She had my heart to make or break. I went all in
... I'm broken now, but don't expect to come back crawling
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeDIAMOND on February 5, 2006 09:48:24 PM Report
OK ..THIS I LIKE...GOOD WRITE
Comment By: AdminRichardM on June 16, 2005 10:16:02 PM Report
Really excellent write. Really describes those tender careing moments. So well done!
Rich
Comment By: Freeamy Louise on March 5, 2005 10:18:50 AM Report
lol...good..lol i mean good!
Comment By: Freeamy Louise on March 5, 2005 10:17:48 AM Report
ahhh the decision to let go and give up, hey! a tough one....but fuck it feels go when you finally do
~amy~
Comment By: Freedarkangel on August 12, 2004 09:58:24 PM Report
I like the rhyme thing you got going and yeah i know that whole feeling good job keep it up

~joyce~darkangel
Comment By: FreeMarian Mason on July 15, 2004 05:42:02 PM Report
We all know the frustration that an unequal relationship can bring
Marian
Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on July 11, 2004 03:17:45 PM Report
nice job! we all have been here.
Comment By: FreeCharlotte on July 9, 2004 10:46:33 PM Report
Wow!! This is a really good poem, it sounds like you really had this girls back! Sorry things didnt work out. Thats sweet how you put that you wouldnt let her fall in, (the lake) i like that part alot, teriffic job! ....charlotte
Comment By: FreePeter Williams on June 14, 2004 06:02:00 PM Report
flowed pretty well. I`m leaning to say your more song style writting, its great :)
Comment By: FreeAbby on June 13, 2004 03:10:43 PM Report
ooo, cool!! :) great write...
~Abby
Comment By: FreeDori on June 10, 2004 05:03:11 PM Report
Very creative rhyming - must have taken some time to do! I like the style!
Comment By: FreeJennifer on June 9, 2004 01:43:10 PM Report
good flow, that carries alot of meaning!
Jen




 


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