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Author Name: FreeBehindTheSurface 5 Comments
Date Added: June 06, 2004 15:06:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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It never stops
This is my story, sad as it may be
It's something that I feel would benefit me
To tell all these people, how I tried and tried
I went to the doctors... I broke down and cried
I got rid of the glass and I told everyone
How I waited and waited, until the scars were all gone
But thats not the end, see, you know what comes after
It ain't lots of sunshine and bundles of laughter
The moment the world got too much to bare
I smashed up a glass with so little care
I cut up my arms, aware what I'd loose
But I knew deep inside it was my turn to choose
The pain never ends, the pain that's inside
No matter how hard, we all try to hide
The way that I see it, this helps us deal
It gives us a chance, for us all to feel
So if someone asks you, why do you harm?
Just tell them it's your way of making you calm
Of stopping the pain, that pounds in your head
That the only thing you want, is to curl up in bed
Tell them there is no way to understand this
That all you want, is a hug and a kiss
That one day you'll cut, your wrist too damn deep
Then finally be able to eternal sleep.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKel on January 4, 2006 06:13:34 AM Report
wow. written so well. so true. kel
Comment By: FreeJami Renae on January 3, 2006 09:43:39 AM Report
You are very talented in poetry...Great write!!
Comment By: FreeJordyn on April 10, 2005 05:27:36 AM Report
wow,kind of sounded like it should have been rapped...or sang....
Comment By: FreeCandace on June 8, 2004 07:14:54 AM Report
hey love your poem
Comment By: FreeJake R. Parsons on June 7, 2004 05:29:22 AM Report
This is a terribly sad poem that I think a lot of us can relate to. You put it together perfectly. I only noticed two things that were "off" and it was just spelling crap so it's no biggy. The story itself and the way that you wrote it far outshadows any spelling error. Very, very sad but beautiful and honest. I commend you for courage!




 


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