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Author Name: Freebjb 23 Comments
Date Added: May 14, 2004 09:05:08 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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*She Doesn't Deserve To Be Alone*

She can't see her beauty
It's too deep within her eyes

And she could never tell you
Why she lies awake and cries

And she doesn't know she's perfect
Because no one's ever told her
So she reaches her hand out blindly
Asking for someone to hold her
And whisper gentile words
While her head rests upon their shoulder

And they slowly spin small circles
As they dance the night away
Upon a crowded dance floor
To the soft music they would play

And it's not her fault that she's lonely
She doesn't deserve to be alone
These weeds she now reaps
Aren't of the loving seeds she's sewn
She tilled a bed for flowers
And now this is all thats grown
It's not her fault that she is lonely
She doesn't deserve to be alone

She planned the most perfect garden
You'd ever wish to walk through
And she is the sweetest lady
You'd ever hope to talk to

I've known her only but a day
But I can see it in her eyes
I can feel within her words
How she's been broken down by lies

She had dreamt of happily-ever-after
And now she can barely pass a day
Without her memories moving her mascara
Into an utter disarray
No deeper pain in life have I
Than to picture her this way

Because she shouldn't have to cry
She doesn't deserve to be alone
She more than him or I
Deserves a love to call her own

Author's Notes:
I wrote this to put a smile on someone special's face
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJessica on March 2, 2009 12:57:07 AM Report

Deeply moved by this piece. Well done!


Comment By: FreeAntony Frank on July 13, 2006 02:53:17 AM Report
'And now she can barely pass a day without her memories moving he mascara into utter dissaray!'

 

Fantastic words, i wish i'd written them.

 

Excellent poem.

 

Regards,

 

Antony.

Comment By: FreeAshley Phillips on June 18, 2006 10:49:10 PM Report

I love this. Very well written, and I love the form. Well done!


Comment By: Freelorissa on June 17, 2006 08:46:21 AM Report
wow great write

 

Comment By: FreeMocha on July 23, 2005 01:00:00 AM Report
Wow......This was just about the most amazing poem that I've read in a long time.......It spoke so much truth.

Love,

~The One And Only Chelsey V.~
Comment By: FreeChrysanthemum on March 16, 2005 12:11:25 PM Report
aww and that someone is me!........awesome write!!!! jeezze can't beleve u thought of me like that how sweet! >hehe I wish< I love your poem keep on do'n what u do best
~chrysanthemum
Comment By: FreeCarrie on August 9, 2004 09:45:29 PM Report
I love this poem. It was the first poem that I read on this site, but for some reason I didn't comment before now. This is truely a great poem Bobby. It's in my favorites, has been since my first day on here.
Have a wonderful day.
***Carrie***
Comment By: FreeLiquid on July 21, 2004 12:14:18 PM Report
Bro, this was deep. I dug it completely. Real heartfelt words.
Comment By: FreeBlack RosedPanther on June 26, 2004 03:19:02 AM Report
wonderful poem... reminds me of a friend i lost to suicide... nice poem, it moved me from within
Comment By: FreeCandy on June 8, 2004 11:23:47 AM Report
well looks like you have achieved your task hehe great write sweets!!

Candy:)
Comment By: FreeJennifer on June 8, 2004 10:25:55 AM Report
This is so beautiful, and definatly put a smile on my face... and probably to many others as well!
Talent Talent Talent is all I can really say!
8-} Jen
Comment By: FreeLily Estrella on May 31, 2004 11:58:50 PM Report
your words are very lovely..thank you for sharing this poem
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on May 24, 2004 03:38:54 PM Report
Mr. Brown*~ Splendid poetry for making anyone smile~ Your work is smooth, and a delight to read~ No one deserves to be alone, and your write is priceless proof....
The Bag Lady.....alone on the streets
Comment By: FreeTee on May 21, 2004 01:30:31 AM Report
Thats an awesome poem.. it kinda made me sad.. poor kid.. well thanx for posting this for ppl to read :)
-tee
Comment By: FreeJessica on May 18, 2004 09:24:50 PM Report
I fell in love with this poem the moment I read it. It's beautiful behyond words. There have been many times when I felt like the girl you described. Fantasic job! :)
Comment By: FreeGothic Angel on May 18, 2004 01:40:27 PM Report
i know who this is for!!! lol!! she did smile, but then she cried. (happy tears)
lisa marie
Comment By: FreeRobyn on May 17, 2004 03:27:57 PM Report
you put all these words in this poem so wonderfully....its just an amazing poem!

~*Robyn*~
Comment By: FreeRonald Hamilton on May 17, 2004 01:36:22 PM Report
nice poem
ron
Comment By: FreeDiana on May 16, 2004 07:11:29 PM Report
What a beautiful poem. I love it.
Diana
Comment By: FreeAmanda Boyd on May 14, 2004 10:48:51 PM Report
He got his smile.... :-D
Amanda
Comment By: FreeAmanda Boyd on May 14, 2004 10:30:54 PM Report
Omg Bobby.... I can't belieb you wrote that... it's so unbelieveably sweet!! Thank you so much! :)
Amanda
Comment By: FreeSuzanne on May 14, 2004 10:19:09 AM Report
Beautiful Poem. Great Job!
Suzanne
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on May 14, 2004 10:18:41 AM Report
This is thoughtful and sweet, Bobby. I bet you got your smile. ML




 


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