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Author Name: Freesybilvane 9 Comments
Date Added: May 12, 2004 08:05:12 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Jewel, eternally named solitaire

There is no tower
High enough for you
No sea deep enough
A mind like yours
Will withstand all the standard techniques

If your heart is silent to the touch
Reconciliation is closer than
You'd believe

If your nights are heavy with demons
The new-born day will show you
That what truly shines is you

Pour your precious pain into an envelope
I won't refuse delivery

Author's Notes:
To a dear friend
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on March 12, 2006 01:39:17 PM Report
Looking through your work, I was so pleased to read this. What a beautiful way to tell a friend you care. jp
Comment By: Freejag on December 21, 2005 02:11:29 PM Report
Boy I need to pay more attention to your work this is inspired...
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on March 20, 2005 12:28:21 PM Report
read this again and decided to take it into favs.
You have such immense talent!

"If your nights are heavy with demons
The new-born day will show you
That what truly shines is you"

what a hugely powerful way this speaks to me. My nights are sometimes filled with demons.
You write from the heart..the true way for a poet to write....not only does it strike a chord in so many who read, but it brings hope and company to the down hearted...those who feel alienated for whatever reason.

I am so proud to know you.
Alison SW xxx

Comment By: FreePaul Peter McLean on August 25, 2004 05:10:02 PM Report
Loving sentiments beautifully expressed Heike. I especially like verse 3. At first I thought the last word should have been "acceptance" but, having thought about it, I think I see what you mean in this last verse. Good work - but I have come to expect nothing less from you.
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 2, 2004 01:12:49 PM Report
Fill your precious pain into an envelope
I won't refuse delivery
What an original thought and what a well written creative poem.
You have a real talent. Heike
Comment By: FreeEric on July 24, 2004 02:15:12 AM Report
Beautiful and sweet telling of desire to help and heal.
Comment By: FreeCorina on May 14, 2004 05:14:57 AM Report
Beautiful Heike, very very intelligent and beautiful. I am glad you came again with something.
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on May 12, 2004 10:56:41 AM Report
Heike, this is a marvelous, inspiring poem. Good work. ML
Comment By: FreeMegan Catherine on May 12, 2004 09:33:34 AM Report
Very touching. Well done.
Meg




 


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