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Author Name: FreeJimiMuller 3 Comments
Date Added: April 26, 2003 18:04:05 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Formless
I am empty
The love I once held, gone
Feelings that used to be present
Killed by the things unaware of their doings

I am hopeless
Thoughts used to scare me
I dwell on things of the past
No longer can I see the present

I am dead
Blood has stopped flowing
My mind still expands
I have considered myself dead forever

I am heartless
I wish you would all suffer my pain
Just to think like me...
...Just to think at all

I am carefree
No longer do I feel
There is no pain I can't stand
It isnt meant to be

I am formless
I hold no shape
Nothing can hurt me
For I... have no soul
I am my own weakness
Simply because I have no form...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on December 13, 2003 06:02:18 PM Report
Dear James-
This was excellent-
I was drawn into your unique and interesting word direction-
You have an interesting style and after reading through a few of your writes today I must say that I am impressed with technique-
Keep writing-
At your age you could take this skill of yours a long way!
Best Wishes~
James
Comment By: PremiumRajalaxmi Vasudevan on October 10, 2003 09:05:05 PM Report
this is excellent...says a lot of things
Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on April 26, 2003 11:17:46 PM Report
A Very nice poem!




 


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