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Author Name: Freesybilvane 11 Comments
Date Added: January 24, 2004 07:01:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Leaving

You have left me
The tap runs quicker than time
Why couldn't you leave me be

Returning to the outset
Leaving your traces
On my mortal surface

How could you break my roses
And take a leave
From my sheltering supervision

Now I'll drown the hours
Until someone will pick up
What's left of me

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 20, 2004 12:52:20 PM Report
Now I'll drown the hours

How well I know this sad reality!

How could you break my roses

Again a wonderful, powerful image of how reality changes in an instant when our "end of the world" comes!
Getting compelled to read more Heiki. This goes into my favs

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 20, 2004 12:51:24 PM Report
Now I'll drown the hours

How well I know this sad reality!

How could you break my roses

Again a wonderful, powerful image of how reality changes in an instant when our "end of the world" comes!
Getting compelled to read more Heiki. This goes into my favs

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 20, 2004 12:51:04 PM Report
Now I'll drown the hours

How well I know this sad reality!

How could you break my roses

Again a wonderful, powerful image of how reality changes in an instant when our "end of the world" comes!
Getting compelled to read more Heiki. This goes into my favs

Comment By: FreeJenn on May 29, 2004 06:35:48 PM Report
Nice poem. very nicely written and i enjoyed reading it :)
Comment By: FreeNiomi on May 28, 2004 12:51:10 PM Report
Deep poem, I like it.
Comment By: FreePaul Peter McLean on May 5, 2004 03:03:26 PM Report
Beautiful, sad poem Heike. Your use of language is very good.
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on April 25, 2004 09:50:45 AM Report
Oh, the heartache of it. "Break my roses"? What an excellent phrase. I just love it. ML
Comment By: FreeJERRY WILSON on March 9, 2004 04:10:15 AM Report
your emotion comes through good write...jerry
Comment By: FreePoetic Soldier on February 12, 2004 04:43:44 PM Report
A very deep and touching poem, excellent use of words, talent on display

N8
Comment By: FreeKelli on January 29, 2004 11:45:17 AM Report
Heike, your poems are great! Look forward to reading more!
Kelli
Comment By: FreeCorina on January 25, 2004 09:46:44 AM Report
This is so sad, still very powerful and beautiful. It's worth waiting.




 


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