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Author Name: FreeClay 8 Comments
Date Added: January 02, 2004 20:01:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Two Doors Down
Two doors down
A woman sits
Thinking of him
Wishing he was there

She's alone now
Yet she can feel him
He's watching her and helping her
He misses her just the same

They hope to be back together some day
They miss each other so
He tries to keep her out of harm's way
So she will not feel so low...

Two doors down
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Comment By: FreeLorraina on March 20, 2008 04:28:54 PM Report
my daughter lives two doors down..I wondered what to expect....Very good poem

It has the feel of someone parted but also is it by distance time or death......the fact

they both will meet again fits all scenario that is sure a gift leaving the reader with

much to concider  Connie

Comment By: FreeStephen Owen AKA Passion Hawk on March 27, 2004 08:10:35 AM Report
you have great talent Clay for someone so young,keep up the good work...Steve
Comment By: Freejess on January 28, 2004 08:42:15 AM Report
Hello Clay...
This is a a great poem....yet very simple. Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading your poems...
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 7, 2004 11:21:26 AM Report
This impresses me,Clay.America changed forever when we started living in apart-ments.This write shows the unnecessary loneliness in our modern world.You have a talent for words.Must run in the family.Keep it up...len
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on January 6, 2004 02:51:25 AM Report
Dear Clay-
This piece is written with a precise
and intelligent approach-
I was completely impressed with your
talent to paint such a picture with
a few simple words-
Your style is unique and fresh-
I look forward to reading the second
piece you have posted here at the moment-
Welcome to the site-
You will be a great new addition to
the circle of writers here!
Peace~
James
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on January 5, 2004 12:36:10 PM Report
Excellent in style and message~!
You are talented, and I shall be
on the lookout for your work~
Welcome to the site, Clay~!

Margaret...the Bag Lady....lovin'
the simplicity of this write~
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 5, 2004 11:56:43 AM Report
Clay, this is very good.



Lady Dragonwyck
Comment By: FreeLance Binkley on January 2, 2004 08:47:43 PM Report
Good poem




 


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