| Comment By: Lorraina on March 20, 2008 04:28:54 PM
my daughter lives two doors down..I wondered what to expect....Very good poem
It has the feel of someone parted but also is it by distance time or death......the fact
they both will meet again fits all scenario that is sure a gift leaving the reader with
much to concider Connie
| Comment By: Stephen Owen AKA Passion Hawk on March 27, 2004 08:10:35 AM
|you have great talent Clay for someone so young,keep up the good work...Steve|
| Comment By: jess on January 28, 2004 08:42:15 AM
This is a a great poem....yet very simple. Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading your poems...
| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on January 7, 2004 11:21:26 AM
|This impresses me,Clay.America changed forever when we started living in apart-ments.This write shows the unnecessary loneliness in our modern world.You have a talent for words.Must run in the family.Keep it up...len|
| Comment By: James Lagoski on January 6, 2004 02:51:25 AM
This piece is written with a precise
and intelligent approach-
I was completely impressed with your
talent to paint such a picture with
a few simple words-
Your style is unique and fresh-
I look forward to reading the second
piece you have posted here at the moment-
Welcome to the site-
You will be a great new addition to
the circle of writers here!
| Comment By: The Bag Lady on January 5, 2004 12:36:10 PM
|Excellent in style and message~!|
You are talented, and I shall be
on the lookout for your work~
Welcome to the site, Clay~!
Margaret...the Bag Lady....lovin'
the simplicity of this write~
| Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on January 5, 2004 11:56:43 AM
|Clay, this is very good. |
| Comment By: Lance Binkley on January 2, 2004 08:47:43 PM