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Author Name: FreeVenomous 2 Comments
Date Added: December 10, 2003 09:12:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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"Enlightened"
Pretty child, Watch the waves crash down below. Young eager one, Don't do it 'cause life's too slow. I've seen all the mountaintops, I've felt all the raindrops, And I've learned enough to know... Don't throw your life away, Because time is not too slow. Constant and stoic, Time pauses for no one. Death is not the answer, Please put down the gun. Look to the sky, Watch the morning glow. Feeling the warmth of happiness, You'll realize that life's not too slow. The beauty of life is in your heart... Let go of your pain. I'm sorry it's been tough for you, I've dealt with it too. It's not time for you to go, You've got so much left to do. Trust yourself, Listen to your soul. Have faith and patience, Soon you'll be out of this hole. Pretty child, Watch the waves crash down below. Young eager one, Don't do it 'cause life's too slow. I've seen all the mountaintops, I've felt all the raindrops, And I've learned enough to know... Don't throw your life away, Because time is not too slow.
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Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on December 10, 2003 01:22:25 PM Report
A beautiful piece, Mr. Houchin~
This 'enlightened' work is so
well written, and makes it a joy
to read~

The Bag Lady....thinkin' 'bout time...
Comment By: FreeCara on December 10, 2003 10:11:09 AM Report
Such truth behind this! Life is way to fast and its only getting faster the older I get. Great piece.




 


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