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Author Name: FreeAbby 1 Comments
Date Added: November 18, 2003 14:11:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Portrait
 
 

permit me leave

my heart among the flower beds
of your sweet smiles and timeless

fireworks of your ethereal eyes

o, your portrait carries a thousand petals,
each heavenly drawn, hundred coloured

i love the cowboy hat
tells legends, classical rodeos;
and your hair under that royal hat

speaks venus in the splendour
of her matchless beauty

i can't leave these alluring eyes,
like sunlight emerging from drizzling clouds
I'm conscripted, drunk
with your overwhelming call 

the virginal, magical shape, 
runs and draws me to matchless rivers

i take runs of regattas endlessly
subsumed in the thunders of your waterfall

                                              

i touch your amazing portrait
you respond with classic symphonies;

our souls are framed from our old loss,
we carry each otherís heart and hold it

firmly more than life

Author's Notes:
(for india, with love)
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 18, 2003 03:13:28 PM Report
MY GOODNESS I CAN NOT BELIEVE THIS .
.HOW BEAUTIFUL THIS POEM IS...
AND YOU DID THIS FOR ME I'M TRULY HONORED...
I JUST DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY I DIDN'T KNOW...
MY HEART IS TOUCHED....
THANKS SO MUCH FOR THIS...
YOUR WONDERFUL YOUR FRIEND >>>> ALWAYS SHE




 


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