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Author Name: TrialAnn 3 Comments
Date Added: October 25, 2003 12:10:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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prelude to empty sky
soft gray rain


slid from the sky


as quiet tears


from a saddened world


were held captive


by a false sun





emotion's promise


was betrayed


in a gathering


shower of sparks


that represented


humanity's turn





away from kindness


and toward


a greedy horizon


filled with falsehood


moved a civilization





eyes watch now


searching for answers


cast spell dim


magic becomes rain


prelude to tomorrow





and an empty sky
Author's Notes:
Inspired by a discussion about how the world is changing and what is lost in that change.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKati Mia Perttula on November 29, 2003 06:40:29 PM Report
This makes you think.
A great poem,I like your writing style :)
Comment By: FreeEdward G Boggs on October 29, 2003 05:03:19 PM Report
also, Ann...enjoy the depth of your work....hope you've been published in print...so when and where is the book signing? ; )
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 25, 2003 12:54:08 PM Report
WHAT A MOVING POEM SO MUCH IN THIS POEM SO MANY CHANGES ...INDIA-SHE




 


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