Today Is: Thursday, April 02, 2020 11:44 AM. Our Topic of the Week: 2019
Questions?

Check our Help area first!

Comments? Suggestions?

Contact us now!

We like hearing feedback from members on how to improve the site!
 
 
 


 
Author Name: Freedyoung 4 Comments
Date Added: October 24, 2003 17:10:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
Views This Week
Members: 0
Unique Members: 0
Guests: 101
Total Views
Members: 2
Unique Members: 31
Guests: 537

Type: Unspecified
Category: General Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Unwelcome Stranger
He stalks the corridors of her heart;
Waiting silently
Until he finds a soft, dark hole
Then takes it violently.

She keeps telling herself to be strong,
But then he comes again;
Moving quickly through her mind,
Whispering of sin.

He tells her all the things he'd giver her
If she'd only follow.
He reaches out to offer her his hand.
His eyes are hollow.

And the always finds herself being taken
To this place of mass frustration.
Then he holds her in his grasp of steel;
Whispering of temptation.
Author's Notes:
1990 This originally started as a poem about a boyfriend that had an uncanny way of getting back together with me. Somewhere in the writing, though, I think it turned much darker. Sort of a poem about how weak I was at the time.
Report Offensive Poem.

'Unwelcome Stranger' Copyright © Dori
Copyright is property of the above author or group. Reproduction in whole or in part is strictly prohibited.
Click here if you feel this poem is in violation of a copyright.
 
Click here to send this poem to someone!

Comments:
Comment By: FreeStormi on August 18, 2005 12:50:14 AM Report
This is a great poem...the words you used flow together well!
>>>Stormi ;-)
Comment By: FreeMARIA on January 22, 2005 03:45:14 AM Report
very deep....
i actually felt it..
come check out my stuff..
Comment By: FreeDenel on October 28, 2003 04:38:02 PM Report
very good write - I think we've all been there before
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 24, 2003 05:33:21 PM Report
BOY DOES THIS POEM REMIND ME OF SOME OF MY DREAMS..ARE YOU SURE WE ARE NOT TWINS?? SHE




 


Check for Announcements.
on our Home page!

User poems are sometimes graced by images and textures stored on our site
courtesy of GRSites.com, Sandy Hradil, and Sherri Emily.


Welcome, Guest!

Become part of our
friendly community
of on-line writers!

Join today!
 
Username:
 
Password:
 
Forget Username or Password?

Members On Line: 0
Guests On Line: 56
Members in Chat: 0


Happy Birthday


 
We Thank You!

For your donations
and subscriptions!

Creative-Poems.com
P.O. Box 7931
The Woodlands, TX 77387

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
monovalent-defence
Copyright © 2003-2017 Creative-Poems.com.  All Rights Reserved. Use of this site is subject to certain
Terms of Service rules which constitute a legal agreement between you and Creative-Poems.com.
By providing links to other sites, Creative-Poems.com neither approves of, endorses, or gurantees
any information, opinions, or products found on those sites. Users follow links at their own risk.