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Author Name: Freeantoinettj 1 Comments
Date Added: March 24, 2021 18:03:03 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Alone
Alone   The night was cold and dark I was alone I could hear footsteps fast approaching Without looking around, I maintained my momentum I continued along the path I could hear the footsteps getting closer, closer, closer I turned around quickly and released a sigh of relief It was only you. "My dear friend, you startled me,í I said "Donít be sneaking up on me,Ē I uttered. The friend laughed I laughed We laughed Then suddenly as friend appeared, Friendís countenance changed With a flash, a knife was drawn And out of the blue it descended First to my neck Then my heart And as I raised my hand to prevent more blows The knife descended yet again, several times Everything happened so quickly I searched in the darkness to obtain a glimpse of your eyes I saw a hollow with a flickering flame I gasped though unafraid For suddenly there was nothingness.
Author's Notes:
Good Day,
So I decided to utilise and explore my creative juices to write some expressions whic resulted in a collection. Please feel free to critique and tell me what you think. I will be posting a few others and I hope you like them.
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Comment By: FreeJeff on April 19, 2021 03:20:14 PM Report


wow, I didn't see this ending coming from the first lines.

you had me from line to line...well done!





 


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