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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 5 Comments
Date Added: April 14, 2021 15:04:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
A Moment for Us


 

Waves thrashing against us in a perpetual motion.

Drops of white foam are rescue back to the ocean.

Seeking for answers within the surf of our beach.

The solution is a mirage beyond the minds reach.

Mixing the sounds while feeling the warm sand.

Toasting like slice bread for another perfect tan.

The seagulls cries along with this natural band.

 A fine-tune for us drawing hearts with a hand.

 

PS. If I lose you I will lose me.

We were always meant to be


 

 

Author's Notes:

you taught me to always embrace the moment

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on June 2, 2021 07:53:44 AM Report

Dan   Has the beach in Charleston been part of your lives of late?  I appreciate the word picture you've painted.

 

 

BTW  Should "rescue" in the second line be in the past tense?

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on May 2, 2021 04:36:26 PM Report

You have described a warm and peaceful moment that rises above the waves. Nice work Dan.

 

~Barbara D.

Comment By: PremiumDean on April 27, 2021 09:02:17 AM Report

A momentous touch in the end as PS to a lovely piece Dan.

Loved it.

~Dean

Comment By: FreeJeff on April 19, 2021 03:17:02 PM Report

This poem makes we wish I would have written something so forthcoming and beautiful


Comment By: AdminRichardM on April 18, 2021 05:14:04 PM Report

That's lovely, Dan! 

Well done!

RichardM





 


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