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Author Name: Freeciteop 1 Comments
Date Added: November 07, 2020 02:11:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
love is like watching someone die
When we touched she felt like December, her lips resembled the taste of Winter,
as she held me, it sent chills up my spine,
she had this searing look in her eyes, like everything was soon to disappear
and as we stood there staring into the wreckage,
She told me... look this is not snow but ashes of angels falling from the sky
she held out her hand and she asked me what heaven feels like? 
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Comment By: Freenoah count on November 23, 2020 06:56:33 PM Report

I like it, esp. falling angels.


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