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Author Name: Freelady in hell 2 Comments
Date Added: June 28, 2019 16:06:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love/Romance Add To Favorites | Text Only
Lost in Abyss

Hey, it’s been a while

Since I last saw you smile

Miles keep us apart

I wanna run to you like a dart


But something’s gone amiss

I felt loss in this special abyss

Everything’s cold including your kiss

So much I’m missing the bliss


Deeply I miss your hug

So much I want to play tag

Pull you closer I would love

Never fly like a dove


I miss your gentle caress

Like a feather it makes me careless

I miss your warm embrace

That always makes my heart race


I miss your voice when you talk

Your soft spoken words that make me weak

Never would I want for you to further walk

Coz you’re the life energy that I seek


Behind closed lids I see you

Deep in my heart I feel you

My mind is constantly filled by you

My body is yearning for you


Emotions’ suddenly falling apart

Love lost now that we’re distance apart

Mind is in chaos and hearts are broken

I wanna wake up from this nightmare of a dream


I love you still

I miss you still

I long for you still

Without you my world stool still

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Comment By: FreeDean on July 19, 2019 11:00:22 AM Report

This is a wonderful piece in the subject of longing after separation, perhaps one-sided, but that is the nature of longing in most cases.

Enjoyed immensely.


Comment By: FreeBruce A. Peaslee on June 29, 2019 06:53:02 PM Report
I really enjoyed this work.


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