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Author Name: FreeMoonStar 6 Comments
Date Added: March 10, 2019 22:03:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Uncertainty
I sit in a puddle of uncertainty. All around me, water seeps in, taking me under its weight, devouring all that I am. My thoughts are blank. What clarity I once held, seems to have vanished. Try as I might, I grasp what small moments of visions I once had. Of the dreams I told, felt, promised, of myself, For myself. How hard it is to forge ahead. How simple life is, yet so hard it has become. I am the key. I am the lock.
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Comment By: TrialMary on May 6, 2019 04:55:17 PM Report
Nice write very well written sometimes the key is only partial answer though 
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on April 14, 2019 08:12:31 AM Report

And you are ever the soulful writer you've always been. In one short paragraph you capture a range of emotion that we all feel Donna.   Hugs,   Henry




Comment By: FreeTristan on April 11, 2019 05:26:02 PM Report

"To teach us how to live with uncertainty, and yet not be paralyzed by fear and hesitation, is perhaps the chief thing that philosophy, in our age, can still do for those who study it.” (paraphrased quote by Bertrand Russell)  You have captured an important feeling that we all recognize within ourselves as we journey through life.  To use this feeling as a caution, a time for introspection and reflection, rather than a death grip is perhaps the best way to overcome it.  Beautifully expressed.  


Comment By: FreeDean on April 1, 2019 02:23:27 PM Report

Moonie oh Moonie. . .

 

The title of you've chosen for your work in this category is so perfect and yet so certain that I almost cried after reading it. The ending says it all as you put it with certainty, "I am the key. I am the lock."

 

Uncertainty is, has has always been, and will always be around us. It's just the way of seeing it and become sure of one thing as we approach our golden era. We become certain about uncertainty, and yet, not everyone can claim 'That' certainty! You celebrated it with the way you've ended this gem of yours.

 

As always,

 

~Dean

 

Comment By: FreeGlata on March 29, 2019 05:22:33 PM Report

I think you have expressed the same exact emotions I am wrestling with! I can't seem to find myself anymore...

As always...well done!

Hugs!!

Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on March 24, 2019 08:36:19 PM Report

You have answer yourself. So take the key and unlock time to write another revealing a heart and soul with spirit. 

Just Me

Dan





 


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