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Author Name: Freethomasaghogho 1 Comments
Date Added: February 25, 2019 22:02:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Adventure Team Challenges/Shotgun Word Bank Poems Add To Favorites | Text Only
Information twist

A look at the distant past
Ignorance took a central part
Giving way to poor treatment
But for those with sound judgement
No one could see the sun blue heart

But then hard work the rule of the games
The truth, the lie it maims
Society was on a pure construct
Only to witness a quick disrupt
Which leads to a self destruct

A peep through the eyes of the now
Full of light but darkness still shows
But they claimed to be informed
Yet they are much more deformed
Walking in the day as though a shadow

Laziness, a swimming pool
Information, a paddling tool
A stitch in time, saves nine they say
Information, a twist today
Pleasant, but just a sinking stool

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Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on August 18, 2019 04:20:11 PM Report

Thomas This is an interesting work.  I know that it was generated by a Team Challenge, but I wonder,  Was there

             something that was being said beyond the construct of the word bank?   In some way, there seems some

             reasoned design in the poem.                                                                                  Bruce.


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