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Author Name: FreeFireHam 2 Comments
Date Added: January 17, 2018 16:01:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love/Romance Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
I love you MORE

I Love You MORE


For the longest time, I struggled with this phrase

Was it a permanent thing, or just a passing phase

As our hearts grew more and more, beating as one

Our love emerged brighter than the noon day sun


"MORE than what?” I then questioned my mind

MORE than days, when the sun refuses to shine

MORE than problems, that always tend to arise

They disappear, when I see the love in your eyes


MORE than disagreements, we've had in the past

All those ill feelings dissolve and never seem to last

MORE than the distance between us, which keeps us apart

The most resilient thing in this world, is the human heart


So, whenever you hear me say "I love you MORE!”

Don't think my love is stronger than yours, I implore

Our love is stronger than anything that may come our way

I love you MORE! And forever, our enduring love will stay


Harold Ham McLelland

01/01/18

Author's Notes:
The phrase and the poem both mean that love is stronger (MORE) than any distance, problems or anything that life may throw it's way...
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 19, 2018 07:40:22 AM Report

Ahhh... your very romantic heart speaks out

The love you feel for your lady is no doubt




The soft side of the heart whispers clear 

 The love for your woman year after year 



You LOVE her more with romances dance

Your LOVE for her keeps you in a trance ....




Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on January 29, 2018 12:49:00 PM Report

Hi there Ham.  I am fond of that saying, "Love you more."  I have a small wooden plaque on the wall to remind me of its sentiment.  But your poem took that saying to a deeper level...so insightful and full of enduring love. The last stanza was top notch! Great poem!

 

your friend, Linda Jo






 


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