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Author Name: Freeblackberrypatch 2 Comments
Date Added: October 23, 2017 10:10:07 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
Blistering Minds
Blistering Mines

You are free, but are you sure
You want to remain behind that door
Youíre more beautiful than mighty waves crashing to shore
My darling, itís you that I adore

Like translucent bubbles that are blown
My love will keep you high on the throne
Youíll see no pain, I promise this
And I will seal this with a kiss
Confused and all tangled up inside
We will walk gracefully side by side
Like open flames too hot to the touch
Youíre the lady that I want so much
I know it will take a bit of time
For you to realize you must be mine
Our love will triumph like the mighty moon above
When we finally fall gracefully in love
So, fly high my love, just like a dove.
With you I will have a blistering mine in love
thinking about what might be 
allows you too , to be happy and free!
Author  Karl  Berry
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Comment By: FreeSandy J Hradil on September 22, 2018 04:45:05 PM Report

Very beautiful!

Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on October 28, 2017 05:10:31 AM Report

Excellently penned, Karl!



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