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Author Name: PremiumSunset 1 Comments
Date Added: April 30, 2016 17:04:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Hold My Hand
Another night in the club it won't end
I'm looking down at my phone no one to text
The music's to loud and hurts my brain
Pass me a blunt or I'll go insane
Come over here girl what's your name?
 
Look deep into my eyes what do you see?
Is it a boy or is there a man who lives in me?
Am I good enough to hold your hand?
Ya gotta tell me girl I'm tryna' understand
Cause I know I'm lost, alone, and afraid
But I don't have time for these games
Promise me you won't be my demise
Ya know I still got my eye on the prize
I want a pretty girl to take over my world
Or at least just hold my hand
Yeah girl just come hold my hand
 
People tell me all the time how I'm so confident
That's not true its mostly fraudulent
You see one day I feel like a king
Grab my guitar and I start to sing
But when it gets dark and I'm alone I'm so susceptible to the cold
I know twenty-fives not that young But I ain't that old
Many year's, many stories to be told
 
But now that I'm here looking into your eyes
My mind is clear and my hearts satisfied
Now grab a hold of me dear
Whisper sweet nothings in my ear
Girl ya know I'll save you from what you fear
Will you hold my hand
Yeah girl just hold my hand
 
Cause I know I'm lost, alone and, afraid
But please girl I ain't got time for these games
Please promise me you won't be my demise
I still got my eye on the prize
I just want a pretty girl to take over my world
Or at least just hold my hand
Yeah girl just hold my hand
 
Now my night must come to an end Will you come with me and spend time in my bed?
All these blunts are getting to my head
My eyes are ain't dry but there's no tears to be shed
Will you just hold my hand? Yeah girl just hold my hand
 
Cause I know I'm lost, alone and, afraid
But please girl I ain't got time for these games
Please promise me you won't be my demise
I still got my eye on the prize I just want a pretty girl to take over my world
Or at least just hold my hand Yeah girl just hold my hand
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeDean on May 2, 2016 02:13:03 PM Report

This is really great. Although it reads and sound like a nice song, yet it is written in a paragraph form. Your feelings are well expressed,

~Dean





 


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