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Author Name: PremiumDream Hearted Poet 1 Comments
Date Added: October 23, 2015 22:10:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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unanswered prayers
From busted up to beating unanswered prayers alone in the darkness of a sexually predator that raped me in a second of a sound who cares if I came to school or work with brushes all down my face my best friend tries but yet I don't say anything location from a place called land down under means a creepy room with pockets full of knifes empty room tied to a chair for a tourte of a dummy and a scary clown I escape like a flash running from for my life oops I tripped over there's another crash guess what there is another shot to a side of my ass help help I scream but once again I thought it was all just a dream until the end I didn't wake up but with a metal piece of glass in my head now I'm dead rest peacefully in a body bag went six feet under from dirt to dirt ash to ash and dust to dust my mother's cries just for rust
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Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on October 30, 2015 05:45:15 AM Report



Hi DHP,

     I thought this piece would be more effective in traditional poetry line format, so this is how I would have formatted it.  I hope that I have interpreted the punctuation correctly

If this has some real life experience at the root of it all I can say is that you seem like a strong lady.

Keep on fighting.

 

Maethforsbye    (See http://www.creative-poems.com/poem.php?id=284432)

 

David

 

UNANSWERED PRAYERS

From busted up

To beating.

Unanswered prayers

Alone in the darkness

Of a sexual predator

Who raped me in a second of a sound.

Who cares if I came to school 

Or work with brushes all down my face.

My best friend tries

But yet I don't say anything.

Location from a place called land down under

Means a creepy room with pockets full of knifes.

Empty room tied to a chair

For a tourte of a dummy and a scary clown .

I escape like a flash;

Running from for my life  I tripped over

There's another crash

Guess what there is another shot

To a side of my ass

‘Help! help!’, I scream

But once again I thought it was all just a dream

Until the end.

I didn't wake up

But with a metal piece of glass in my head

Now I'm dead.

Rest peacefully in a body bag  

Six feet under.

From dirt to dirt, ash to ash, and dust to dust;

My mother cries just for rust.





 


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