I thought this piece would be more effective in traditional poetry line format, so this is how I would have formatted it. I hope that I have interpreted the punctuation correctly
If this has some real life experience at the root of it all I can say is that you seem like a strong lady.
Keep on fighting.
Maethforsbye (See http://www.creative-poems.com/poem.php?id=284432)
From busted up
Alone in the darkness
Of a sexual predator
Who raped me in a second of a sound.
Who cares if I came to school
Or work with brushes all down my face.
My best friend tries
But yet I don't say anything.
Location from a place called land down under
Means a creepy room with pockets full of knifes.
Empty room tied to a chair
For a tourte of a dummy and a scary clown .
I escape like a flash;
Running from for my life I tripped over
There's another crash
Guess what there is another shot
To a side of my ass
‘Help! help!’, I scream
But once again I thought it was all just a dream
Until the end.
I didn't wake up
But with a metal piece of glass in my head
Now I'm dead.
Rest peacefully in a body bag
Six feet under.
From dirt to dirt, ash to ash, and dust to dust;
My mother cries just for rust.