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Author Name: Freesatishverma 1 Comments
Date Added: September 24, 2015 23:09:35 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Full Stop
I allowed you to tread on me unflinchingly. 
My mind on pause, 
ungrieved you turn back the clock. 
Enough to stun the century, 
I take cognisance of divine’s club foot. 

I did not believe in self-pity 
but I was racing against time 
to avoid a jealous path running with me. 
Yet I was sleeping on bushes of estranged thorns 
without locking my golden age. 

Tulips are no more my favourites. 
You have to dig deep to plant the bulbs 
and wait. When death opens the door for me, 
I wanted to be free from any commitment 
and ready to walk in, like a foot soldier. 

This cosmos is mine, body is for you. 
It no more obeys my command. 
No more commas are needed, 
a final full stop will do. 
I am returning back to my home.
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Comment By: Freecolin skilton on September 25, 2015 08:38:54 PM Report

Hi Satish

a three way split on this one road in the sense that the writer is looking at three ways to find solace and understanding

and then concludes there is only the one path that lies not in the deep trench of life he once was ready to turn over and sow the seeds

of love an life he once treasured for so long

now he is looking elsewhere and the words change once more with the mood of the story as he moves further away from what he has held dear and now wishes to return to a home enviroment

that he hopes to find and return to, no more commas needed because there will be no more full stops either as he walks

fully prepared to find that goal and realises that pain and jealousy will not solve anything so he moves away from their thorny side .

 interesting write my friend and enjoyable

colin






 


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