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Author Name: FreeNewKing 4 Comments
Date Added: July 30, 2015 07:07:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Insomnia
Insomnia  

 

If you let it, it will swallow you whole
Sadness and self pity
Clinging to you like a blanket of mist
Eating at your soul 

 

Sadness will drain your strength away
Sucking the light from your eyes 

 

I'm not a happy person
Guess it isn't in my nature
I only write when I'm sad
Lately, I'm running out of paper 

 

Why can't I be happy 
Why do I try so hard, not to be
I push people away
Even those closest to me 

 

Don't know what I'm sad about
Don't know if I really care
Some things I don't need to figure out
When you're sad, curiosity is rare 

 

Five hours of starring at the ceiling 
I begin to get a funny feeling
What if I will never fall asleep
Then the voices will continue to speak
Until I crack and lose my mind
You hear about it all the time
"Man can't sleep, so he kills his wife!"
With a hammer, a sink and a kitchen knife 

 

"I will let you sleep" The little voice said
"I'll turn down the volume in your head"
It's a trick, don't be deceived
Peace comes only when you are dead 

 

There are lots of things I don't tell
If thoughts were sins, I'd go to hell
I dream of things I'd do to you
I dream of things I shouldn't do

 

Author's Notes:
I put this under the category depression, not because i think it necessarily belongs there, but because I couldn't find a more appropriate category.
I don't suffer from insomnia, but at times I am kept awake because my mind wont shut up.. 
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Comments:
Comment By: Freejohn carter on May 6, 2016 12:32:00 PM Report
There is something wrong with you.

Comment By: FreeAmber P on March 10, 2016 01:59:01 AM Report
I can feel your frustration; these words cut like knives. You're very good at bringing your emotions to life. 
Comment By: FreeTimespell on September 5, 2015 01:23:20 AM Report

Im not that clever, but I dont run out of paper.

I will never be too oblivious to the needs

Maybe you should drink more coffee

maybe not..., maybe not indeed












Creativity and Imagination  









Overall Impression  

 

Really do I need too explain

 

:)

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on August 3, 2015 10:37:24 AM Report

The mind can be a tricky maze when trying to fall asleep; it would seem easy for some, but for many it is not.

LTK





 


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