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Author Name: FreeTagen_Lily 5 Comments
Date Added: May 22, 2015 19:05:15 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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My First Love
I speak the words that keep my demons at bay
And feel the stillness that envelops me every time I pray
Too long I've been in shadows
I've forgotten what light feels like
My first love.

Far too long I've let fear darken my foolish heart

Not a sheep amongst wolves, but a wolf from the start
Preying on innocence, shedding blood
There is shame in my heart
For I have betrayed
My first love.

I've wandered so far and slaughtered my soul

Become so ragged and the breaths I draw are cold
Can I find my way back home?
I pound at the gates
Of my first love

Can I fall into the arms

Of my first love
Author's Notes:
For God
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJessica on September 1, 2018 05:33:12 PM Report
Love the use of imagery. Well written :)
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on June 24, 2017 03:42:55 PM Report


Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on May 23, 2016 01:10:35 PM Report
This is so beautiful, i love it:)
Comment By: FreeWaseem Akhtar on June 9, 2015 01:19:45 PM Report

All the human beings, in fact, finally revert towards God for First/Last Love, The Eternal LOVE for ever ...


So, there is no doubt that you are so true in your expressions...when we get hurts, then we ultimately finds the God's love too.. which never stops to coming our ways but these are we who close our eyes for some cheaper "timely" loves for ourselves here... :)


 

May God bless all of us..ever.. Aaameeen

 

Wasim

 

Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on May 28, 2015 04:22:42 AM Report








I think it would be better if you did not repeat the phrase, "first love” at the ernd of this poem:-



"Can I fall into the arms


Of my first love"

 

Would it not be better if you made it clear that the poem is addressed to God rather than to some earthly lover.?

 

So perhaps something like:-

 





"Can I fall into the arms


Of my Divine Saviour"

 

Just putting in the capital letters makes it clear that the first love is God.

 

Best Wishes 

 

Dave



 











 


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