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Author Name: FreeaRomnceHasFallen 1 Comments
Date Added: April 20, 2015 22:04:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
i hear the wind whistling shrill between the cracks
i feel the pockmarks like grand canyons on my feet 
cold water flowing as if craters into lakes 
and a streak of lightning dances wildly 

i'm in a sea of words, gregarious and lame
they pierce my ears like icy hailstones of shame
they melt so solemnly as i drift along 
and your hand is sinking even lower 

wretched memories 
cast the mutilated speyside aside 
wretched memories 
look alive, even though you just died 

and as i stand before this wild atmosphere
i just can't help but wonder why i am here
when i could recoil to my cavern of peace 
but you make it all too enticing 

wretched memories 
cast the mutilated speyside aside 
wretched memories 
look alive, even though you just died
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Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on April 24, 2015 03:04:37 PM Report

The pain of loss can hit hard when it is a loved one who is lost.



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