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Author Name: Freedazriz 1 Comments
Date Added: February 22, 2015 14:02:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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I do not miss the negative bliss

Or the feel of invisible touch

The empty space i cannot replace

Seems to tire me much

I have no fight for what's out of sight

All my senses are lost

I crave for the time decisions were mine

Taken without any cost

I try to be true in all that i do

Alas its never enough

I do insist on taking the risk

No smooth just always the rough

Tomorrow will come and so will the sun

That i know to be sure

Until that day ill make my way

As i have done before

A step at a time i know that are mine

Always taken in faith

Wait for the chance to pick up my lance

And get back into the race

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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on February 23, 2015 12:48:43 PM Report
There is determination written into these lines; a feeling of regaining oneself or control over your decisions. The rhyme scheme is consistent and one that I always enjoy. Thank you for sharing.

~Barbara D. 


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