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Author Name: Freesatishverma 3 Comments
Date Added: February 10, 2015 23:02:50 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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UNLEARNING
Everybody was in hurry to unpack 
the sins and reshuffle the names 
of burns, by taking a holy dip 
in mauve lake. I wanted to defang them. 
Acid attack had the inversion effect 
on the expressions. 

It was an obscene vision 
unrolling the infant 
for bleeding an opponent. The procession 
moved on. Details never came out. 
Only the flaming bodies, loud thuds 
and the screaming virgins. 

This was unlucky for the hutments, 
fragile poles crumbled down, unspeakable 
emptiness on the faces. Something has 
to be unlearnt. Too much pain of 
the knowledge. Ectopic pregnancy?
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Comment By: FreeTimespell on February 14, 2015 10:43:05 PM Report

The birth of deception is only in the fools eyes..

Be there one amongst the brave..,

should we stand and take notice...!!

For we our but dust, and dust begets us all.

 

 

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on February 11, 2015 01:17:18 PM Report

Judgements and injustice...it is so prevalent in the world. I don't pretend to know exactly what this poem is about but I agree, some things are barbaric and senseless, these practices need to be unlearned.





~Barbara D.~
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on February 11, 2015 09:58:23 AM Report


Morning, Sir.  As always, I so enjoy your writes.  Have a GREAT day.

 

Lady D





 


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