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Author Name: Freelaura_robertson13 2 Comments
Date Added: February 04, 2015 16:02:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Love/Romance Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Another Valentines

Another Valentines

Another 14th day of the 2nd month,

and lonely hearts pine,

though itís a silly day with a silly name

and marks nothing wholly significant for those in love for thereís always love.

Itís just the day that rings the bell of lonely chapels,

where hopeful loverís dream,

and another year, and another year

pass into unforgiving wells of dampened out hope.

Another valentines and I wish I was on your mind;

I wish I was your world; I wish you werenít my bind.

I wish I was where youíre going; I wish I was where youíd been;

I wish that heartís that ring true had their feelings due.

Another valentines and Iíll draw black hearts

for cheeks donít blush red with no romantic words and kindling arms.

Another Valentines and I wish I was on your mind;

I wish I was your world; I wish I could break your heart.

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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on February 11, 2015 01:44:20 PM Report


It's not hearts and flowers for everyone on Valentine's Day. For many it is a reminder of dampened hope. The second half of this does show hope though...a longing for romance, blushing cheeks and romantic words. The last line was contradictory to the verse filled with wishes that preceded it, specifically the expression "I wish I could break your heart", this didn't fit imo.



~Barbara D.~ 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 5, 2015 08:20:40 AM Report
My My you do have a way with poetic words... Just beautiful

 Always ~ She Whispers




 


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