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Author Name: Freesatishverma 1 Comments
Date Added: November 23, 2014 23:11:05 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Inside me, I take a turn. 
By tightening the noose 
hangman feels liberated. 

In the grave, charred mistakes 
waking under the massive ashes 
of slaughtered sun, grieve 

for the light. Time was death. 
Every lovely tree was time, 
leaving footprints on our existence. 

Seeing the stillness in total eternity 
like the calm lake dying on the 
other side of the truth. 

Of the dismembered faith, 
and fear of future, and action 
to move with the higher lies.

Satish Verma
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Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on November 24, 2014 09:55:27 AM Report

I "feel" a lot from this write.  "Charred mistakes", yes and I know there are more to come.  Have a great week, my Friend.


Lady D


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