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Author Name: Freelaura_robertson13 2 Comments
Date Added: October 23, 2014 17:10:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love/Fantasies Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Catchable Moon Beams

I have this romantic notion, a tale I dream,

Where love flows in a steady stream and pours into my heart;

that’s where life truly starts.

The fragrance of the orange and jasmine fills the air;

I will melt into your arms and truly feel that feeling, that soaring sensation

of two bodies becoming one and two hearts connected.

The moment when we kiss will be full of heavenly bliss,

And the door that closed on me once before opens to this new wondrous place,

where all I can see is the trusting face of someone who loves and adores me.

All my love, and it is like someone has lit life’s stage;

the years of dreams become catchable moon beams,

The moment when you stare into my eyes like I am the only one in the world;

now we are the world.

Softly place my hair behind my ear and bring me to light,

Catch me in honest arms and cherish my soul,

Fold me into your life, your dreams – I want to be everything to you,

Take this romantic notion, this tale, this dream;

make it catchable moon beams.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on October 30, 2014 12:40:53 PM Report
Love can be so inspiring ~ well done! LTK
Comment By: FreeFred Clark on October 24, 2014 08:57:47 AM Report

The waking of the heart, the expectations of love. So very well put. One small bit of critique if I may...try it without the ands at the beginning of each stanza.





 


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