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Author Name: Freelaura_robertson13 0 Comments
Date Added: June 10, 2014 18:06:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
What you've become

Donít like what youíve become,

Werenít you my life, my sun,

Why do your eyes look sad, tears

Roll down to a heart of fear.

Spring is meaningless now,

Love is not borne anew so

I close my door, a heart half full

Is a heart half empty.

I mull the mesmerising tones and lightness of dreams

The lingering light through the gap when the moon beams

And youíre only half in life, half in sub-consciousness,

No need to hold it together; no need to be cautious,

Till the sun breaks the haze, and I gaze into my reflection

And I donít like what Iíve become. 

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