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Date Added: May 13, 2014 19:05:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Fight In An Elevator

Rewrite of Aerosmiths' Love In An Elevator. Inspired by the recent rapper Jay Z fight video on TMZ

Lookin' like a dog

Actin' like you're her big boss man

Instead of her marriage company

I'm bettin' on the dice

Before this year's up

You'll be divorcing

Happy public image

Nothing but a fantasy

Ooh don't give me that shocked look

Sisterly bonds ain't so blind

You got my girl

With a clever hook

Too bad for you player

I'm the one

Read between the lines


Fight in an elevator

Throwin' my hands up

Cause you've been keeping a secret low down

Fight in an elevator

Throwin' my hands up

Till I knock a liar to the ground

Jay Z in the elevator

Saw a little more then just her lingerie

On the second floor

Overheard when to him she said

'Baby, I'll see you later"

And love you just a little more

No truth ain't gonna get me stuck

I'm speaking out

My mind won't be a party to

Keeping this lie alive

Overheard when she said

"I'll show you how to fax in the mail room

Honey have you home by 5"


Clearing the air, clearing the air

Homie, one more last time

Oh no, it ain't fair

So I'm starting

A fight in an elevator

Throwin' my fists up

Cause you've been keepin' a secret low down

Fight in an elevator

Homie going down


Ain't gonna be no penthouse player

After she takes your record to the cleaners

Ain't gonna be no millionaire

Better hope you're a real good fast talker

Explain away to the judge

Your love affair

Get your timin' right

Could finally be a test

You ain't gonna pass

I'll chase you all the way to the stairway, honey

Kick your sorry ass


Did you care?

Did you even care?

Honey, one more last time

Now that just would't be fair

So here I am

Startin' an fight in an elevator

Throwin' my hands up

Cause you've been keepin' a secret low down

2014 Ramona Thompson

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