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Author Name: FreeCristian Dolon 1 Comments
Date Added: February 11, 2014 20:02:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Inspirational Add To Favorites | Text Only
Simply Existing
How should I start now that we are breaking up?..
Guess I will wash it away with a smile as I talk.
I will remind you about our story which is at its end...
That once true romance that started off as friends.
It was a time when life was never sure...
I was given the woman I always asked for.
With you compassion was so needed honey...
Luckily I have in me a touch of some poetry.
Even though I was shy and it was hard at first for me...
My mind works a lot with what always been a fantasy.
Remember the day for the first time you heard me sing?..
I was alone at a beach on the sand making sandy rings.
I recall you never saying anything at the time...
I smiled and asked; "Hello, is everything fine"?
With you a lot of passion was highly required...
There were moments I was left hanging on wires.
I had to end up making my job love.
Singing alone while you are not around...
Making up clusters of hearts on the ground...
Wondering where was I lost and where was I found.
Would you believe me if I said that you...
There is nothing more beautiful then you...
Nothing at all ever more inspiring then you...
Simply you, yes you, little you, nothing but you.
You are immense when you really want too...
Make up you have no clue when you know you do.

Now that I have to check new listings...
I'll let you know... Thank you for existing.
But my story isn't over there...
There is still some more to share.
How did this relationship start, I do not know...
Far as I remember that day was rainy and cold.
It's like a mystery that is hard to get...
But it was always there and never left.
Must be the memories that just don't...
Wish to simply let everything go.
Maybe it is time mixed with the age...
They just don't want to turn the page.
As I sing this in front of you tonight...
Let me add that everything will be alright...
Right now it doesn't matter who is wrong or right.
I just want to make it clear that you...
There is nothing more beautiful then you...
Nothing at all ever more inspiring then you...
Simply you, yes you, little you, nothing but you.
All I can say and know by far...
There will never be a love as pure as ours.

And as this house I am exiting...
Thank you for existing.
Author's Notes:
Even in the final moments of a relationship... Say it how it is.
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 12, 2014 11:08:27 AM Report
Heart breaking to read all too soon love leaves with all of lifes problems..

maybe you two work out the problems... don't just throw your love away..

We have such a throw away socitity try to make it work..

Hugs to you both.... She Whispers 


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