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Author Name: FreeThe Dream Ghost 2 Comments
Date Added: October 14, 2013 03:10:31 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Patriotic Add To Favorites | Text Only
Eyes On The Nation
Upon a hill
Next to the ocean
I lay upon cut grass
with my eyes cut wide open
I say cut because my eye lids are gone, they are now forever open
Open to the sky, open to the flaws of this creation
Open to the flaws of this nation
How disgusted we should all be of our congregation
Pathetic attempt at fund controlling the mass population
It will never succeed, we shall tear down our commander's station
With violence, with strife, with pity & open eyes
We will strike, with our eye lids to the sky
Our faces held up high
Covered in red, by the pouring sky
Yes I said red, because God is bleeding
He is bleeding upon our nation
disgusted even more then us
by his own creation
Alas, if he could
I'm sure he would turn the world to ash & glass
This is our damnation, we created a failing status for a nation
Now we care more about these likes, these re-tweets, & keeping clean streets
We've forgotten what it meant to truly eat, & I don't mean just buy food
Remember when you had to work for that? 
Remember back before food stamps & government propaganda we use to look at our work & be proud of that?
If even half of congress could think just 10% like me we would have decreased poverty
Increased job progression, & attempt to truly communicate as one to kill a recession, 
But until we cut off the serpents head, it will never be dead
The greed inside this being will continue to grow, 
Far past my growing old
So before I hit 50
Let us retake our nation,
With rounds spraying from the 50.

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Comment By: PremiumLindaM on October 15, 2013 02:52:49 AM Report

It is heartbreaking to see the mess our once great nation has gotten itself into.

I can't say I agree with everything you wrote but I agree with most. You stated

your opinion with powerfully.


Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on October 14, 2013 11:38:38 AM Report

Good write, Dream Ghost.  Very truthful about America today.        


Lady D


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