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Author Name: FreeFirestoneFeinberg 8 Comments
Date Added: September 24, 2013 08:09:03 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The truth is that when I write a
24 Sept 2013

The truth is that when I write a
Poem I usually try to say something
Brilliant or obscure so that I can
Impress someone with how perceptive
I am but really it's all nonsense
Since maybe I'm a little brilliant
Or something but even if I am I
Don't really go around saying things
Like as if some idiot in the future

Would say them to some other idiot and
Then that idiot would be impressed with
How brilliant the first one was does 
This make sense or did I lose you I
Mean I guess I was trying to say that
I don't always have something brilliant
To say but I keep trying like even
Right now in my subconscious I'm hoping
That this poem is really brilliant.

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Comment By: FreeTimespell on September 27, 2013 09:30:16 PM Report

dE ja vous






Comment By: FreeHenry M. on September 27, 2013 02:34:31 PM Report
Truthfully David, I think each writer writes what is in his mind because when it comes from there it seems there is always some meaning to it. Sometimes that meaning needs to be deciphered by another writer and I think you have crafted something here that is worth thinking about.    Henry
Comment By: FreeBrian Dziokonski on September 27, 2013 02:06:54 PM Report

Your Brilliant and humble, But then again what do I know? And the future idiots don't even know they're idiots yet. So what am I even talking about?

Oh yeah! your poem. It was brilliant, but then again I might be an idiot. Oh well, nicely done. bri 

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on September 26, 2013 06:32:22 PM Report

I once commented on some nonsense, passing itself off as brilliant observation. I told the lady I didn't understand a word of her poem, and she said she didn't either.......BECAUSE....the stuff she writes is so deep even she can't understand it....

The sad part is, she was serious....len

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 24, 2013 12:41:29 PM Report


As poets and writers we all try to write a brilliant poem others can relate too!  You have written another brilliant poem your style..PLease never change that ..its what makes you so special and dear to us all!! Love ~ India

Comment By: Freeleahlopez on September 24, 2013 11:00:04 AM Report
Well, David, we all like to impress. :) And you never fail to impress me. I think if someone tries too hard you can notice, because they lose the passion and sometimes the real meaning, instead using bigger words then necessary to make them come across as highly intelligent. You never do that David. You write with passion and truth.
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on September 24, 2013 10:06:24 AM Report

Don't worry dude, this was per usual. 



Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 24, 2013 09:24:43 AM Report

Hi David:  I really like this write.  The last two lines are so perfect.  Dear Friend, PLEASE keep a'postin' as we love your thoughts.  Have an awesome day.


Lady D


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