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Author Name: Freeramonathompson 2 Comments
Date Added: September 11, 2013 14:09:11 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Lyrics Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Dust In The Wind

Rewrite of Kankas classic song by the same name

 

Inspired by Zak Bagans of Ghost Adventures on The Travel Channel

 

After we close our eyes

No darkness is eternal

There is a moment

Enlightened at last

We are never really gone

Sent this message

In my dreams

Life never truely passes

To understand

All we have to do is

Just open our eyes

Practice a little curiosity

 

Dust in the wind

All we are is not just dust in the wind

 

Never just the same old song

Our beliefs so wrong

So much deeper then a mere drop of water

Like the gods

We are an endless sea

Not all we do dies

Not all we crumbles

To the ground

Oh why must we refuse to see

 

Aa aa aa

Dust in the wind

All we are is not just dust in the wind

Oh no no

 

Now just hang on

Believe in the unbelieveble

Something is there that does last forever

Beyond the earth and sky

The soul does not slip away

Just listen if you will, honey

Just for a minute

I swear this is no lie

 

Dust in the wind

All we are is not just dust in the wind

All we are is not just dust in the wind

 

Dust in the wind

Nothing and no one is just dust in the wind

Yeah, nothing and no one is just dust in the wind

In the wind

 

2013 Ramona Thompson

 

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Comment By: FreeWide Awake on September 12, 2013 08:04:18 AM Report
Awesome thoughts and fascinating poem Ramona~



I would say that we are dust, soul and spirit...

I would say that our dust and soul perish when we die...

I would say there is a saviour that can offer us a new soul...

I would say every person's spirit will live on forever...and that is why it is so important to consider where you would like that spirit to abide forever...in heaven or a new eath with a new soul...in death with a spirit that has no soul...in hell with a spirit that is forever tormented? 



I agree, we are more than just dust....................... 


Comment By: PremiumLindaM on September 11, 2013 09:24:45 PM Report

 I am not familiar with the original lyrics by Kansas so I am not sure how much is from the original and how much is yours,

but I like the lyrics very much. If this is mostly your own work, then you did a great job.

Linda





 


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