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Author Name: FreeaRomnceHasFallen 0 Comments
Date Added: August 30, 2013 21:08:59 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
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She said "I need this"
Then he slipped away to a private hell
This meeting's adjourned
I'm getting out 

He said "stay longer"
Then the four in red combined their sorrow
What a way to live
I'm getting out 

A worthy cause could kill you 
So long as it keeps you alive
Can you function as a dog among the starving wolves?
Can you manage complacency?

I'm unfit to play this role
All the pain and inactivity 
I would gladly make my forest if they didn't need the wood 
To build their own abode of shame

Your poison chooses you
Unity protects the weak
Sanity is a second hand 
Depression is a choice

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