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Author Name: Freepoematic 10 Comments
Date Added: July 11, 2013 17:07:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love/Fantasies Add To Favorites | Text Only
Wouldn’t Say No For a Kiss That …

Wouldn't  say  no  for  a  kiss  that



Wouldn't  say  no  for  a  kiss  that

knows  where  to  land  - -  and

how  to  command

the  ship  that  manned  - -  and

ready  to  depart

to  magic  land,

covered  by  the  softest  sand;

Safe  to  survive a crash-land.


Sorry  Captain,

you  should  have  made  sure  the  cockpit  door  was  shut!

I  know . . .

You  couldn’t  take  your  eyes  off

the  kiss  that  flew  the  plane  - -  and

you  just  watched.

I  would’ve  done  the  same  if  I  were  you.


A  kiss  - -  well  worth  waiting  for . . .


I  wouldn’t  say  no,

Would  you?



Author's Notes:

You wouldn't say no too,
I  know . . .

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Comment By: FreeKatie on July 15, 2013 05:06:33 PM Report
That's some kiss you are describing.    When it's right, it can shake you to your core in a good way.  Katie

Comment By: FreeA Tyler Kehl on July 13, 2013 02:01:00 AM Report

I like your method of writing, the words are easily read and flow smoothly. Great word choice to keep my mind paced. 



Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 12, 2013 10:17:49 AM Report

Mmmmmm... a soft kiss is so enjoyable..... Especially when you have that ach to reach out kiss them there lips!!!! Oh I do love this you ... you are just man candy!!!

 Hugs ~ India

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on July 12, 2013 09:00:49 AM Report
What a fight of fantasy!  I won't tell you where it took me...  and I'm a pretty old guy.  Thanks dear Dean for the ride.   And did we arrive quite safely?  --david
Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on July 11, 2013 11:26:47 PM Report
I always wait for a kiss, soft, sweet and delicate the best
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on July 11, 2013 11:19:15 PM Report

Now tell me will ya, what else is there in this life to wait for if not an anticipated kiss? Not much I would think.  Nicely penned, as always! So adore the way you bring forth your pieces.. Always a puzzle, with a web of words placed all around..




Peace out~


Comment By: PremiumLindaM on July 11, 2013 09:06:05 PM Report

Commanding kisses, oh yeah....  :-)

Few things are more enjoyable than being kissed by someone who really knows how.

Loved your write


Comment By: FreeHenry M. on July 11, 2013 06:40:00 PM Report
Who could say no to such a kiss as the one you describe Dean?  Not I.    Henry
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on July 11, 2013 06:34:29 PM Report

Rhyme in time is so sublime, it makes one's spirits climb. Good work, Dino!



Comment By: Freeleahlopez on July 11, 2013 05:39:53 PM Report

I am in waiting, ha ha ha ha ha! Excellent write as always Dean! I love your style and humour, very natural. 




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