| Comment By: Firestone Feinberg on July 12, 2013 03:34:35 PM
|Beautiful, Dan. this poem is YOU. Thanks! --David|
| Comment By: MoonStar on July 11, 2013 11:54:00 PM
Aw, you do know that one word was supposed to be 'READ' right? lol Eeeek!!!
Just sayin'.. :)
| Comment By: MoonStar on July 11, 2013 11:52:46 PM
Awwww hear that? Why it's the sigh coming form deep within as I red your words over and over again.. You always inspire me my friend.. Your thoughts make me shiver with their power. This was simply amazing!
I do so miss that voice..
| Comment By: LindaM on July 11, 2013 08:44:33 PM
" And our tears have no colors
like the pouring rain"
'Yet a rainbow arrives to dye
even the sky's pain"
These are really wonderful lines Dan.
| Comment By: Wide Awake on July 11, 2013 07:04:41 PM
|How did you know?! :o)|
Nerve wracking night and morning but thanks be to God for the rainbow!
Very perceptive poem Dan...lovely thought-work on colors.
| Comment By: leahlopez on July 11, 2013 06:11:20 PM
I am lost for words? Literally! How does a writer become so.....amazed that, nothing anyone can say will ever be good enough to emphasise how truly remarkable this write is. WOW!
| Comment By: Tomahawk on July 11, 2013 01:48:09 PM
The sky can be the only refuge for a broken spirit because it's always there and ever changing. Though I really don't cry, I feel deeper in my heart....like the sky looks. Hang in, cuz you're Dan the Man!
| Comment By: Blake Hightdudis on July 11, 2013 01:35:26 PM
Dan this was wonderful and true, right now my tears have no colors neither does anything else,
and creative and some beautiful souls we are and we help each other get your bounce back.