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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 5 Comments
Date Added: June 25, 2013 09:06:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
I surrendered

No surprise here good times donít always stay  

The miles roll with me and Iím now without you

Words said and decisions made were a drama play

Thought about it and I had to do what I had to do

Tender moments on a summer night are far away

Your last kiss was the only thing I knew was true

Author's Notes:

I just felt like writing something.  I will be married to a great woman for 35 years in September.

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Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on December 23, 2013 04:43:34 PM Report
That is a killer of a last line, Steve...Just lovely...len
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on June 27, 2013 09:12:44 AM Report

Lovely but sad poem that many of us have experienced at sometime in our lives. I know I did a long time ago.

Congrats on 35 yrs of happiness with your wife.


Comment By: FreeMichelle Bowman on June 25, 2013 06:26:03 PM Report
thanks for sharing this write. you may not be experiencing this now, but I am, and it makes me feel a lot.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 25, 2013 12:50:31 PM Report

Wow...35 years is a long time!! Good for you both!!

Treasure that love always ~ Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on June 25, 2013 11:05:41 AM Report

Yes glad you left the comment, for i can realte to this wonderful write.


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