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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 8 Comments
Date Added: June 21, 2013 13:06:43 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love/Fantasies Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Your Poetic Touch
Is this then your poetic masculine touch 
a rush for my veins my blood playing
with zig zag burning lightning 

Are you capturing the rest of my emotions
with whispered sweet words that unbutton
my wounded heart so very slowly  

~*~
What are you doing with my trembling mind
 your unclenching my weakening strong hold



  You are just to much for my lungs to breath
so much freshness within my stale
mortal feminine being



 Why do you reach for me  .....
There are so many woman  in this world
that you can have in your life now ...
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Comment By: Freeleahlopez on June 22, 2013 07:26:31 PM Report

My beautiful female poet, what a wonderful write? However, the question at the end....why you? Do you really need for that question to be answered? Any man would be mad not to want to reach out to you. You have so much emotion, devotion and time and patience. 

 

MITZEE

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 22, 2013 04:01:44 PM Report
This is pretty strong stuff, India...Well done kid....len
Comment By: FreeBrian Dziokonski on June 22, 2013 09:40:31 AM Report
Very effective and powerful India. I could fee the poetic angst in every verse. You seem to have an endless well of emotions that you are able to bend, twist, and capture with incredible imagery on the page. To be able to do that is a gift indeed. Well wishes, Brian.
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on June 22, 2013 09:13:51 AM Report
ANOTHER SPECTACULAR POEM FROM OUR PRINCESS.  THIS SEEMS TO TELL OF A ROMANTIC LOVE BETWEEN A MAN AND A WOMAN, BUT TO ME IT REALLY SEEMS A MORE TRANSCENDENTAL THING.  THIS LOVE IS DEEPER THAN REGULAR LOVE.  IT IS DIVINE.  I HAVE THE FEELING THAT THE MAN IS GOD AND THE WOMAN IS ALL THE WORLD.  IT TELLS OF GOD'S LOVE FOR HIS CREATIONS.  STUNNING VERSE!    david
Comment By: FreeSavannah Collins on June 22, 2013 01:05:03 AM Report
I thought my free verse was good, this was lovely. Great work. -Savannah
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on June 21, 2013 10:31:00 PM Report

When we have been hurt in the past we often put up walls to protect us from being hurt again.

When the right love comes along and proves to be loving and faithful, those walls finally start to crumble

and we begin to trust again. It's like coming out of a self imposed prison. I loved your beautiful poem and

am so happy to see you posting again. The place just isn't the same when you are not here.

Linda

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on June 21, 2013 04:12:11 PM Report


I go along with Blake here, India, very sweet, indeed, but do you have unanswered issues?


 


Len

Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on June 21, 2013 02:25:12 PM Report
Beautiful my friend, sounds like there are questions in you heart.




 


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