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Author Name: FreeaRomnceHasFallen 0 Comments
Date Added: June 17, 2013 01:06:59 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Carbon Copy
You didn't say what I was thinking
I guess this means you're inferior 
Welcome to my world 

This can't be a healthy passion 
Breath is all I need to chase you away
But I want you here 
 
Help me with this amputation 
Drastic actions, break my habit
Help me bleach this imperfection 
I can't stand to wait for the rain 

So you touched it, wait for nightfall
He'll be waiting for the bells to toll
This is how I feel 
 
The past is over, the sadness my friend 
Lies within the confusion of her 
Are you really sure?
 
Help me with this amputation 
Drastic actions, break my habit
Help me bleach this imperfection 
I can't stand to wait for the rain 
 
You're already ahead
Why are you still talking?
Take a moment to breathe
She's a word from fading 

You're already ahead
Why can't you shut the fuck up? 
Take a moment to breathe
She's a second from walking




 

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