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Comment By: Mary Lou Allen on July 30, 2013 06:32:23 PM |
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Such brave insight into the mind that holds the stuff that makes the poet. I've watched the day break after finishing a poem inspired by a dream that woke me in the middle of the night. Your poem expresses the "breathless ride" common to those of us who cannot resist boarding that "express". Good one, Dan. ML
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Comment By: Steve on July 15, 2013 09:44:05 AM |
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I enjoyed the
poem and the arrangement, nicely written.
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Comment By: She Whispers on July 10, 2013 11:37:35 AM |
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INterestin choice of words as poets I think we all get lost ut we struggle to express our emotions
the best we can.. I love this... Hugs ~ India
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Comment By: Tristan on June 17, 2013 05:37:50 PM |
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Sometimes we find ourselves getting lost in the words and their rhymes, and the rhythms of the times. We chase the shadows that run before us, and behind us, in hopes of catching one before the lights come on. Your thoughts lead me, in a strange way, on a quest for meaning that hides in the mysterious world of words and the minds that invent them... and then melds them artistically together to make the poetry that lets the heart experience something new. Nice work. Tristan
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Comment By: Firestone Feinberg on June 16, 2013 09:05:03 AM |
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VERY creative and VERY special. Only you could have written such a song -- it bears your singular signature. I love the flow and how the words all connect so seamlessly. Bravo! --David
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Comment By: Leonard Wilson on June 13, 2013 06:22:40 PM |
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The poet is a strange animal. He may blend in with the regular folks well enough, but the poet is basically a lonely being, lost in the inner workings of his or her's inner mind and soul. We attempt, through writing, to connect with a general population who really has no idea who we are...Great write...len
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Comment By: Blake Hightdudis on June 12, 2013 06:41:18 PM |
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really enjoyed and loved this piece.
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Comment By: Linda Jo on June 12, 2013 04:38:59 PM |
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I had the privilege of reading your poem before it was posted on c-p. I am glad you decided to put it up for others to read here. Words can take us on a variety of journeys...especially well chosen ones that stir the imagination. I really liked the line about the Tunnel of Love...it took me back to the carnival ride at the county fair when I was in high school. (ohhh, my steady stealing a kiss in the dark!)
Words too, can evoke a certain saddness...The Last Good-bye...losing someone in which you are especially fond.
I really like the concluding line...great finish!
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Comment By: leahlopez on June 12, 2013 07:00:55 AM |
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A great pleasure of mine is to read poetry that grips you through love or thought provoking scenarios. You have done this with your write. Very creative.
MITZEE
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Comment By: Dean on June 12, 2013 04:44:02 AM |
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... and what a privilege to read this both literarily and technically brilliant piece of work. Thank you Dan
~Dean
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Comment By: LindaM on June 11, 2013 10:58:56 PM |
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Beautifully expressed Dan. One of my greatest joys is reading the work of other poets, including yours.
Linda
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Comment By: Henry M. on June 11, 2013 07:21:47 PM |
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This is so verytrue Dan, may we always have the time to read the words from all of those pens. Henry
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