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Author Name: Freeramonathompson 2 Comments
Date Added: May 22, 2013 17:05:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
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Behind Masked Eyes

Inspired by a dear friend.

 

Thanks Jim

 

Rewrite of The Who's Behind Blue Eyes

 

I'd really like to know

What he's like

This mystery of a man

This dream of a man

Behind masked eyes

And I wonder

Has he ever known what its like to be loved

To be held in a real woman's truth

Instead of a cruel one's lies

 

Chorus

 

How sad it seems

His words betray unfulfilled dreams

As sweet a guy as he seems to be

I pray he does not pass his hours

Always lonely

Only wish I could love him

With a vengence

Set his artist's soul free

 

I wonder

Has he ever known what it's like

To feel those Heavenly feelings

Like I do

Feelings so true

Could I break thru a shell so hard

Be his lover

Take away all his pain and woe

That wall he has up

Somehow, someday could I break thru

 

Chrous

 

I wonder has he ever known

What it's like

To be like a king treated 

To live a life undefeated

Behind masked eyes

I wonder

What should I say? 

For I too have been too long lonely

How can I make him understand?

I'll never tell him any lies

 

Chorus

 

I'd really like to know

What he's like

This mystery of a man

This dream of a man

Behind masked eyes

And I wonder

Has he ever known what its like to be loved

To be held in a real woman's truth

Instead of a cruel one's lies

 

2013 Ramona Thompson

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on May 24, 2013 06:23:51 AM Report

Nice lyrics....  really like the lines:

'Has he ever known what it's like to be loved

To be held in a real woman's truth

Instead of a cruel one's lies'

Linda


Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on May 23, 2013 11:28:59 AM Report
This was totally awesome, kept thinking of myself on this.




 


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