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Author Name: FreeMoonStar 7 Comments
Date Added: May 20, 2013 02:05:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love/Fantasies Add To Favorites | Text Only

Like fingers slowly moving through ones thoughts
They softly touch,
And you give in..

For to not feel?
I could not stand the  pain.

For you see,
I need your touch.

The feel of your lips upon mine.
The exquisite way your fingers slowly move over me,
Beneath me.

Oh yes..


If I close my eyes,
I still can see you,
feel you,
taste you..

Like a treat.
To savor.
Oh the joy..

You come into the room
Eyes, darkened with desire,
stare at my form.

I smile..

Oh how the mind works.
Memories flashing like beacon lights,
blinding, making the darkness seem surreal.
And oh how quickly passion springs forth,
upon your arrival.

  I am lost.
Sinking towards a place they call memories.
Of passion heated ruby red color
And nights filled with cries of ecstasy.

And as your lips move teasingly over mine
Their touch sending shivers up and down my spine,
I cry out.

'Thank you Lord!'

'Thank you..'

Like fingers slowly moving through ones thoughts...

Author's Notes:
A little more erotic than my others.. but I think still in good taste.. Hopefully those who read it agree...
Moonie xo
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Comment By: FreeBrian Dziokonski on May 22, 2013 06:17:53 AM Report
Tastefully erotic, a unique write nicely done! Brian.
Comment By: FreeTristan on May 21, 2013 01:02:49 AM Report
Sensually beautiful but, to me, Moonie, not erotic... and in the purist of gentle tastes.  When you blend the senses between whispers and touches your descriptions of thoughts become feelings, and the magical mystery of Moonie evolves in its most enchanting and overwhelming lines.  Your poetry breathes passion and explodes ecstasy to the point of rapture while leaving the reader anticipating more, and more and even more...  very well conceived and well-written, as always.  Tristan
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 20, 2013 02:30:28 PM Report
The sensuality of this piece fairly sizzles, Moonie..This is in no way in bad taste.It is a celebration of sex, the greatest thing on Earth....len
Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on May 20, 2013 10:51:29 AM Report
a very sensual and lovely write, you can feel the passion flying delightfully here.
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on May 20, 2013 07:40:15 AM Report

Anything that you write can NEVER be thought of any other way but tasteful and lovely and magnificently sensual. StellaLuna, you will always shine bright and beautiful!



Comment By: FreeDean on May 20, 2013 06:45:51 AM Report

I like my tea, my coffee and even my hot chocolate brewed.  This was the most deliciously brewed tea; most aromatically brewed coffee, and most beautifully creamy coloured hot chocolate I've ever tasted Moonie. Started and ended with the same mysterious whisper, shushshshsh......

Loved it,


Comment By: PremiumLindaM on May 20, 2013 04:53:18 AM Report

Sensual, passionate, loving, and tastefully articulated.

I loved it, went back and read it again, then loved it even more.



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