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Author Name: Freela-la908 2 Comments
Date Added: May 12, 2013 21:05:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love/Romance Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Lake house
 
Come sail on my lake of tears
and I will build you a house
with foundations grand.
Come listen to the swish of the
licking of tounge on sand,
fly-fishermen half submerged
they stand.
I want to take a gamble on you,
lets float on our backs
hand in hand,
retiring to the lake house-
soaked through blue.
Come nestle with me in the shadows,
come for me, emerge from the
shadows and folds of yourself.
Sink into the slumber land,
dream dreams,
water licking the sand.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSavannah Collins on May 16, 2013 12:39:31 PM Report
Yes, great imagery indeed. Great write -Savannah
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on May 13, 2013 01:15:09 AM Report

Nice use of imagery and metaphor in this clever write.

Linda





 


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